Wednesday, April 22, 2009

Some updated/edited emails by our very OWN friends


Hi, for email/letter writing, here's a sample. Key into the comment box for other practices! Happy sharing:)







Letter:
18/4/2009

Dear Sam,

How are you doing? I am fine. I like riding bikes. Do you want to come to my house to ride together next weekend? Please reply. Thank you.

Your friend,


Mike
As for email, you could remove the date.
Hi Dearies!!!! Our class has done a wonderful job for a start. Here're some samples from your classmates. There is still room for improvement ya. Well done and cheers:)
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Dear Jay,
How have you been these days? I hope you're fine! I have received a notice on some Science workshops which will be held at the Singapore Science Centre. I know you are very interested in designing and making robots so I'm inviting you to attend the Robotics classes with me.

If you want to attend with me, you must register for the classes as soon as possible as there are limited seats for the workshop.

There are a few highlights but I think the "Robotics Modelling - Star shooter Soccer Robot seems the most interesting of all the highlights!

I feel really excited about attending the classes and I think if you go with me it will be even more exciting! Hope you are joining me, I'm sure that you'll like this workshop! See you there!
Yours truly,

Rou Wei
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Dear Jay,

I have received a notice on some Science workshops which will be held at the Singapore Science Centre. I am very keen on learning more about Robotics. I know that you are very interested in designing and making your own robots.
The classes will be held on the month of June. We should register for the class as soon as possible, as there are Limited seats available. The "Robotics Modelling" seems to be the most interesting.
I am very interested & excited to about attending the classes. I wish you can attend the workshop with me.
Your pal,

Macabelle
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Dear Jay,
It's been sometime since I saw you. I have just received a notice on some Science workshops which will be held at the Singapore Science Centre in July.

Can you accompany with me to attend the workshops? I really wish that you can join me as we have not hung out for a very long time.

If you want to go, you must sign up as soon as possible as there are limited seats. You can register by calling 6425-2580 or email to friends@science.edu.sg.There will be some activities like, Physical Science, Robotics and Camps.
It seems that the Robotics Modelling-Star Shooter Soccer Robot is interesting. I am very excited for all the activities that can be found there. It will be so much fun if we can go together. Please reply as soon as possible okay?
Your pal,

Ken
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Dear Jay,

How are you doing? I am fine and I hope that you are fine too. I have received a notice on some Science workshops which will be held at the Singapore Science Centre. Are you interested? It'll be held for the month of June.

You must register for the classes as soon as possible as there will be limited seats. It seems that the Robotics Modelling - Star Shooter Soccer Robot is the most interesting of the highlights!
I feel very excited about it. I wish you could accompany me too.
Please reply as soon as possible. Thank you.
Your friend,
Florence
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Dear Jay,
I had received a notice on some Science workshops. I am very keen on learning more about Robotics. I know that you are very interested in designing and making your own robots.
The classes will be held in June at the Singapore Science Centre. There are limited seats available so you must register for the classes as soon as possible.The highlight seems to be the Robotics Modelling - Star Shooter Soccer Robot.
I feel very excited about attending these classes. I hope you can join me too.
Your pal,

Zheng Jie
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Hey Jay,

Recently, I received a notice on some Science workshops. It is about Robotics. I know that you are very keen on learning more about Robotics and also very interested in designing and making your own robots. So when I received this notice, I thought about inviting you along!

The workshop will be held at the Singapore Science Centre and it will be during the month of June. There are many things we could learn and I think the most interesting highlight of the workshop is Robotics Modelling – Star Shooter Soccer Robot. Since we love playing soccer too, I would be going there and I hope that you would join me.

However, you must register for the classes as soon as possible as there are limited seats available. I cannot wait for the day to come. I bet it would be a very fun and enjoyable day and we could also learn a lot of things about robots! Please reply me as soon as possible.
Hope to see you soon!

Your friend,

Jamie
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Dear Jay,

I have just received a notice on some Science workshop which will be held at the Singapore Science Centre. You know that I am keen on learning more about Robotics and I know that you are interested in designing and making your own robots. So I think we should really go for the Robotics workshop.

There are 18 specially designed programmes lined up in the month of June. We must register for the workshop as soon as possible because there are limited seats available and Robotics is very popular.

The most interesting of all the highlights is “Robotics Modelling-Star Shooter Soccer Robot”. There are more exciting programmes such as Physical Science and Camps.
If you want to get more information or registration details, you could go to www.science.edu.sg/friends, call 64252580 or email to friends@science.edu.sg.
I am really excited about the workshop. I already asked my parents about the workshop. I cannot wait to receive your reply.
Your pal,
Syaiful B.R.
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Dear Jay,
I have just received a notice on some Science workshops which will be held at the Singapore Science Centre. I am very keen to join and thought that you could join me too. I hope that you will come along.

It is at Science Centre and it is in the month of June. You would need to tell me as soon as possible as there are limited seats available. Robotics modelling- Star shooter soccer Robot seems to be the one that is highlighted and interesting.
I feel that it will be very fun and interesting attending the class together. I really hope that you could attend this class with me.
Your pal,

Shi Yi
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Dear Jay,

I have received a notice on some Science workshops which will be held at the Singapore Science Centre. I am very keen on learning more about Robotics. I hope you will come with me as I know you are very interested in designing and making your own robot.

The classes will be in June. We have to register for the class quickly as there are only limited seats available. There are several different types of robot that we can choose to make but I will be choosing the Star Shooter Soccer Robot as I think it is the most interesting and attractive robot to make.

I feel very excited and on top of the world that there is this event coming. I hope you can come with me to this fun event as this is the June holidays.
Hope to see you there!
Regards,

Carmen.
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Dear Jay,
How are you? I am fine. I have received a notice on some Science workshops which will be held at the Singapore Science Centre. It is held during the month of June and I know you are keen on learning more about Robotics.

There are a lot of highlights and there are Physical Science and Robotics. One of the highlights is Robotics Modeling and Live Wire workshops. But I think the most interesting of all the highlights is Robotics Modeling – star shooter soccer robot.

There are also camp at the Science Centre, so register for the class as fast as possible because there are limited seats for it. I hope you can come with me as I think the workshops will be very fun. I am looking forward to your e-mail and the workshops. Please reply back as fast as possible.
Thank You.

Yours truly,
Lin Shen
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Dear Jay,

I have just received a notice on Some Science Workshop which will be held at Singapore Science Centre. I am very keen on learning more about Robotics. I know that you are interested in designing and making your own robots. I would like to invite you to attend the Robotics class with me.
There are 18 specially designed programmes lined up for the month of June. As I told you that it will be held at Singapore Science Centre and the classes will held at June. Please register for the classes as soon as possible as there are limited seats available. Robotics Modeling-Star Shooter Soccer seems the most interesting.
I feel excited about attending the classes and I wish I could attend the class as soon as possible.If you want to register or get more information about this workshop, you can go to this website ww.science.edu.sg/friends. You can also contact them or email them. The e-mail is friends@science.edu.sg, and the contact number is 6425-2580 or 6425-2535.
From your pal,
Kaixin
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Dear Jay,
How are you doing? I am fine. I know that you are very interested in making and designing toys. That is why I am inviting you to the Singapore Science Centre.

There is an event which is the Exciting Science Workshops during the month of June. There will be 18 events lined up for us. We should register as soon as possible as there are limited seats available.

I think the most interesting of all the highlights is the robotics modelling-star shooter soccer robot. I feel excited about attending the classes. Hope you can join me too. Please reply as soon as possible. See you soon!
Your friend,
Sithiqu